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PostSubject: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Tue Apr 14, 2009 11:16 pm

Why the hell not. I dont know if this is gonna work here, but I figured, what the heck, maybe. Just maybe....

Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread


As the title says, this is the Solaris Sign Up Thread.

The Solaris Universe is an incredibly futuristic Star-Wars-esque area. Many planets encompass the Solaris Universe, all of which may be named as the story goes on. Note that if you do come up with a planet, you MUST describe in INTRICATE detail the planets surface, climate, type of government (if any) Inhabitants, and technology. Note also that this goes for types of lifeforms, if you introduce a new one, you must provide sufficient information to literally "paint a picture" in the readers mind. This goes the same for the "Appearance" section in your SU's. Use detail, otherwise it may be rejected.

Note that if I reject your Sign Up, you will have the chance to revise it as many times as you want, hopefully improving each time, so dont take offense. Make good Sign Ups, and we can make this Role Play Godly. Please, dont mess this up.

Storyline: Mercochant has long been a planet of peice and prosperity. Belonging to the Galaxy Hubris, a subsidiary of the Mother Universe, Solaris, Merochant is the Main Hub of trading in the Solaris Universe. Mercochant is a huge planet, encompassed by one huge city. High skyscrapers and robotically controlled systems are a regular in the area. It is known as the "High Traffic" street of the Galaxy. Being the Central Trading Hub, nearly every type of Alien can be found on Mercochant. Nearly every item imaginable can be obtained here. Unfortunately, this has made Mercochant an optimal target for poaching and theft. The MSF (Mercochant Security Force) is always at the top of their game for this reason, but still finds dealing with the thefts to be hard on the Planet.

Another Planet in the Hubris Galaxy, Archos is the Political head of the System. This Planet governs all the rights of all beings in the immense Solaris Universe, although some of the outlying systems have decided to make their own rules. Archos' rule only extends so far. The current Government is a Democracy, utilizing four Senators from each Planet in the Solaris Universe. Votes are cast and Laws are placed. This System, unlike conventional Democracy, has outlawed a Ruler of the Democracy, having a rather unsettling event many years ago which has been long forgotten. This Planet plays host to every species of Aliens in the Solaris Universe, even the vile dissadents of the Outlands.

The Outlands are a series of Planets outside Archos's jurisdiction that are notorious for Smuggling, Gamblers, Murderers, and the other Scum of the Universe. For the longest time, a group of Gangsters called Nal Aleator has been running a Smuggling operation on the Planet Latrocinor. It is thought this Gang has been behind the many Smuggling Operations in and out of Mercochant. Their ruthless leader (yet to be named, spot up for grabs!) has led the Gang for many years, and lives up to their Vile reputation.

Among the outlying reaches of the Galaxy, the particularly strange system of Pravus has recently been rebelling against Archos's rule. A seemingly evil being (up for grabs as well) has been speaking his piece about how he beleives the Universe should be run. Unfortunately for Archos, many sentient beings have been giving in to his unusually high influence (one of the characters powers, must be included in his/her SU) and pledged their allegiance to this new Dictator.

Information: There are numerous free systems in the Solaris Universe, and each of them have different views about which side to choose. Each Planet also is home to a distinct race of Alien. Each of these must be described in IMMENSE detail. Your imagination is appreciated, as each constructive mind can bring something new to the table. Now, your SU does not just have to be Human, it can be whatever Alien race you decide on. Also, the technology is advanced, but standard rules apply. Do NOT make any device or do anything that would be considered a "God-Mod", and do NOT Bunny. If you do bunny, be sure to converse with the person who's character you are wanting to bunny, along with OK'ing it with me Via PM. If you should violate these common rules, your post must be edited. If you refuse, or if it becomes a constant repetition, you will be Booted from the Role Play, and not welcomed back unless I OK it. Now, have FUN!

Your SU should look like this:

Name: (First and last)

Race: (Alien, if human, Spanish, American, etc.)

Gender: (M or F, as Alien gender may get confusing)

Planet: High detail if you are creating your own planet.

Appearance: (Go into GREAT detail here plz. Color, appendages, etc.)

Biography/History: (Again, GREAT detail plz)

Personality: (Good detail needed here)

Weapon/Altercations: (Favorite weapon(s), reason, Altercations meaning missing limbs, mechanical arms, eye changes, robot upgrades, any special upgrades)

Ok, now have fun Guys! Start Signing Up Now!

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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:37 am

Cant be arsed to read anything, skipped down to dam character sheet.

Name: Dusk Skull
Race: Neko
Gender: Male
Apearance: Fuck detail ima get a picture <.<

Biography:Basicly, dusk was abondoned as a child and left to fight on his own...
Personality: Loner
Weapon: Well this seems futuristic so ill go with a bolt action rifle and small knife
Powers: Can teleport, camoflauge into the night, and has great sniping skills
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Wed Apr 15, 2009 9:35 pm

Honestly, not enough detail. Nowhere near enough. You only put one line into each category. I classify this as lazy and must be revised.

Decent picture, but I still need more detail
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:43 am

-Will be edited in 10 more days cause i cant be arsed-
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:58 am

cool pic. but storm is right, more detail is needed.

i'll make one later, but does this mean you won't be doing Solaris on wiichat?
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:01 am

Eh, prolly not. We have enough RP action on WiichaT, and most of the Wiichat members plus more are here, so I figured it would attract more of an audience.

Btw, cant wait to read your SU Shadow!

@ Dusk: The amount of detail you gave was lousy. Just lazy dude...
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:14 am

well the picture works fine for appearance discription. gotta admit that
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:24 am

I agree, but he needs personality, biography, and all the other points.
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:25 am

And now for my sign-up.

Name: Novek Coros
Race: Lunar Everto, Latin for Moon Demon
Gender: Male

Appearence: White skin and blood red spiked hair. He stands at 6 feet tall with pure red eyes. The whites, the pupil, everything, his eyes are pure red. Has pointed ears and a small tattoo of a crescent moon on his neck. He looks relatively human, besides his eye and hair color.

Biography: Novek was born on his home planet of Lunaris. Lunaris is a desolate wasteland of silver rock covered in endless moonlight. His people are mostly miners that sell a precious gem known as Devil Light. Devil Light is used as fuel for defense barriers.
Novek lived his life normally until the age of 30, when his planet was invaded. Novek fought bravely but still was forced off his homeworld. Since then he's been going from planet to planet, trying to discover who it was that took over his planet. He discovered his planet was taken over by the goverment so that they would control the Devil Light buusness. So Novek swore revenge and with his craft he can do it.

Personality: Novek is carefree and lets things off very easily, unless they're from the goverment. That's when he becomes cold and heartless. Novek is smart and does his best to help others from the goverment.

Weapons & Abilities: As a moon demon, his strength comes and goes with the cycle of the moon. Depending on the lunar cycle of the planet he's on his strength goes from puny human, to herculeon strength. He has a necklace with a special tech in it. If he presses he gets teleported to the bridge of his ship. In his boots are special anti-gravity jets that let him fly. He carries an energy blade with him at all time. At the press of a button the blade activates and is blood red in color. He also carries a small high powered pistol at his side at all times.

His ship, named the Lunar Shadow, is a high speed fighter fit for three. He pilots it while his brother is gunner and his younger sister is navigater. The ship has powerful missles and armor piercing laser cannons. It can travel at three times the speed of light.




well storm, am i in?
and can we have more than one character?
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:52 am

Eh, might as well join this. Let's see if I can go with it to the end this time.

Name: Nezmany Obchodníka

Race: Unknown, suspected to be human.

Gender: Male

Appearance: Nezmany has the shape of a normal human; one head, two eyes, arms, legs, nostrils, ears, one mouth, tounge, etc. His whole body, aside from his upper face (being the upper part of the nose, his eyes, and forehead), is covered with a dark blue robe. His arms, chest, mouth, and legs cannot be seen. He wears light boots with the color of black. the same goes for his gloves. His voice is very deep and echoey.

Nezmany wears a huge, dark purple towel across with waist, in the form of a belt. This "belt" ties his bag of supplies, which is twice his size and a darker blue than his robe, to his back. These supplies have included food, weapons, clothes, armor, fishing supplies, hunting suppiles, and some "rare, mysterious objects", according to him.

Biography/History: Nezmany has a very mysterious background. Nobody knows where he came from, or why he came to the great planet of Mercochant. One theory that came up was that he got kicked out of the Outlands, for performing odd and horrendous experiments on civilians. He then came to Mercochant to reform himself. Another superstitious story is that the political planet, Archos, sent him here to spy on the population of Mercochant. Whatever the reason, he is there. However, there hasn't been an spec of information given on his past, and some beings are still searching for the truth.

Personality: Nezmany, or, as he prefers, The Merchant, is a very cynical and sacastic figure. He laughs at one's misfortunes, and believes people are just greedy bastards who will do whatever to get what they desire. At the same time, he is very serious, as well as paranoid. He does not allow anyone to touch his bag of supplies until they pay him for the item they're after. He never reveals any part of his skin, aside from his upper face. He is also very cunning, and can decieve his way out of almost anything.

The Merchant is a traveling salesman, going from tradepost to tradepost, setting up a wooden stand that he normally buys from an obese worker who loves money. When he's done with his location he silently takes down his stand, trashes it, and move away, without anyone knowing.

Weapon/Altercations: The Merchant normally knows how to avoid fights, so weapons aren't really neccessary. If he does need help escaping, he'll use one of his many poisonous smoke bombs stored in his robe and, while the enemy is suffocating, flee.

...Sorry if this SU is a little sketchy. It's hard giving information about a mysterious character, and it's late.
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Fri Apr 17, 2009 2:06 am

Yes Shadow, excellent SU. Your definately in. I especially enjoyed the whole "Moon power" thing. Very original, especially that you included it depends on the planet. Accepted

@ Dal: I actually enjoy your "sketchy" character. I have a good feeling he will fit into everything in the story quite nicely. Accepted.

@ Everyone: For now, you may have two characters per person. If we have a shortage of players later on, I will allow 3.

@ Shadow: You have my permission to have three as you stated they are Novek's brother and Sister, so I will only count that as two, since they are related and work together.

And now... For my Sign Up.....

Name: Rex Rgis Malum

Race: Ferinus Viperre

Gender: Male

Appearance: Being an inhabitant of planet Ustulo, Rex is a lizard-snake. He is able to change color, change size and, at times, if he loses any appendage he can grow them back. This applies to nearly every appendage. However, this power does have a cost. It cannot be used in succession. If a body part is cut off more than once, it will not grow back. He maintains a human stature, his scaly body reaching 6'3". His skin is incredibly rough, being born the traditional Viperre way, his skin is made of Metamorphic Igneous Crystal. This substance resembles the roughness of the arid stones in deserts.

The skin is peircable though, proving an effective but not invincable shield. The one thing it does provide full immunity from is heat. Being of Viperre descendence, heat is their natural source of energy, and so their skin evolved to withstand tremendous amounts of heat, nearly reaching Supernova. Small stone spikes cover his entire body, yet his face is somehow human. It is a rocky, grainy face, but he has eyes, a mouth, one nostril in the center of his forehead, and small holes for ears located in the very back of his head. He also has a pair of earholes on the tops of his hands. These are used for hearing what others cannot.

He has small spiked rocknails that are attached to his fingertips. He uses these either for battle or to tear things apart. His teeth are serrated and set in three rows from the front to the back of his mouth. The move like a conveyor belt, new teeth constantly replacing the old ones every other week. His rocky body is colored a deep Brown color. His body will change color depending on both the temperature and the climate of his surroundings. He can also change color at will, making him a very useful spy. Typically, he wears no clothing. This is so he can better "accustom" himself in any situation if needed.

Planet: Ustulo is a scorched desert; home to some of the feircest predators in the Universe. It is known amongst travelers as the "Furnace Planet." The dirt being able to reach temperatures of over 450 degrees, the Planet is rather repulsive to the normal traveler. However, the occassional Game Hunter will attempt to grab a peice of the rare substances the Planet holds.

Biography/History: Rex Rgis Malum is a member of the family Ferinus Viperre. This family is a long-lived and long-evolved chain of lizard-snakes. They are known to have some of the toughest skin in the Universe, making them an oppurtune target for most hunters of rare skins and merchant traders. The Ferinus Viperre are a rare species, mostly associated with the other dangerously dark creatures of Planet Ustulo. The Ferinus Viperre are known to reproduce in the center of their known Planet. As the adults are already immune to heat, the eggs which hold their children are not. The egg is taken to the core of the planet and broken open prematurely. The fetus of the baby Viperre is then buried in the molten sand while the parent returns to the surface.

After several months of "incubation", the baby is ready to leave the core of the Planet. Due to the immense pressure and heat, the newborn's skin grows as Metamorphic Igneous Crystal. The baby then utilizes its claws and digs its way to the surface, fasting all the while and taking 3 weeks to reach the surface at best. The Viperre are able to survive for months at a time on a single meal, losing none of their weight or strength in the process. When the newborn arrives at the surface, it is already able to fend for itself. Rex was born this way, along with every other Ferinous Viperre on the Planet. Feeding on small creatures at first, Rex was confronted with his first real challenge when he was several months old.

He encountered a giant Calx Vernus, in english it means "stone snake". The Calx Vernus swallowed young Rex whole. However, due to Rex's intensely rough skin, the worm's innards were ripped apart from the inside as Rex slid down his throat. This did not kill the worm, however. Rex spent the next couple weeks inside the worms stomach, feeding off the worms meals as it ate, sharing with the worm a Parasitic relationship. Unable to gain any nutrients from its meals, the worm soon died of starvation, and Rex burrowed his way out of the worm's stomach, emerging from its mouth. Rex then spent a few weeks guarding his host's carcass by day, and feasting upon it by night.

A Calx Vernus has the most protein-filled meat in the known galaxy. Rex was able to quickly triple in size during the time it took to finish the worms carcass. Time did not pass normally on Ustulo, haing three suns, it was impossible to tell how time passed. After a very long time, Rex reached his current height and potential. Having ripped apart a recent gang of hunters, he was able to usurp one of their starships. His primative instincts left, and the other side of his brain kicked in. He began to investigate the ship, learning to read the files, learning to speak the trans-galactic language English, and learning how to fly the ship.

He took the ship and flew blindly into space. Not knowing the known galaxies secrets, he embarked on a mission to find as much knowledge as he could about the new world he had discovered. He landed, by crash, eventually on the Trade World Mercochant. He has wandered the towers and high standing streets of the planet, learning of the Planet's inhabitants and attempting to see their way of life. During this time, he was attacked by another group of hunters. Being on a trade world, his head was as high a price as anything.He was decapitated and dismembered. His body was thrown to the bottom trenches of the Planet, living amongst the filthy poor who resided there.

Being a Ferinus Viperre, his skull and other body parts grew back within a week. He now traverses amongst the low class peoples. He vows to wreak hazardous vengeance against those that cursed him to his present fate.

Personality: Rex is a vicious predator by nature. When in the heat of battle, he gives in to his animal instincts. In normal relations, he is very calm and collected. Due to his appearance, many tend to avoid him. He has no true uncontrollable animocity toward anything unless he is hungry.

Weapon/Altercations: Rex tends only to use his claws for hunting. In personal combat, he uses a pulsar energy blade the color of the sun that he found amongst the hunters that attacked his homeworld. Using his primitive urges, he has enhanced his dexterous strength with the blade by implying the feirce nature of his homeworld. He calls the style, in human tongue, Vapaad. Vapaad's strength comes from the ability to harness a creatures natural animocity and applying it to sword combat. Being his creation, he is the sole living master of Vapaad.

I added the Planet section in order to better explain things. Hows the SU?
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:09 am

I was hoping for a second i'll do that later, my sign up for his brother. the sister i was planning on her staying out of the story mostly she would stay on the ship constantly working on it cause she is their mechanic
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:14 am

Cool. Sounds good to me. What do you think of my Sign Up?
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:55 am

its excellent.

and i just finished checking my e-mail so i'll make my sign up now
my charcters all share the same species and the same general history.
first here's what you need to know of their sister:

Name: Seleen Coros
Appearence: She wears a blue shirt with short sleeves and dark blue pants. She has combat boots and a tatto of a cresent moon on the back of her left hand. Has pure sky blue eyes and long hair of the same color.
Personality: Shes kind and reassuring, Seleen helps hold the siblings together during tough times. Her hatred for the goverment is why she puts up with her Brothers crazy schemes
Skills: She can't fight but she's a first rate mechanic as well as one of the best navigaters in the galaxy. When her brothers are out doing missions and the like, she remains on the ship, upgrading and fixing it.

and now my other "real" character

Name: Drov Coros
Appearence: Drov stands at 5'8" and is muscular for his height. He has short curly black hair with pure black eyes. He has a tattoo of a crescent moon on his right shoulder. He wears a black muscle shirt with a black vest and black cargo pants. He has steel-toe boots which he filed to a spike tip on each.

History: Drov had overall the same history as his siblings. But while Novek was learning and his sister becoming a navigater, Drov was goofing off on his hoverboard. He would ditch his lessons and enter planetary contests which he almost always won. His family let it go cause he helped bring in more cash.
When the planet was taken over he escaped with his siblings to a nearby allied planet. That's when he learned he had to take responsibility and help out. He learned many things while there and when they finally left, Drov was a wiser man. He has sworn to help and protect his remaining family no matter what.

Personality: Drov is very cocky and stubbern, both of which piss off his sister. Despite the attitude problem, he's deeply loyal and cares a lot for those close to him. He hates the goverment and would like to try a direct assault but respects his brother to much to even suggest it.

Weapons & Skills: Drov has kept his hoverboard throughout his life and has been modding it when he has some spare time. With it he can fly and travel at super-high speeds. It has straps that lock him in, so he has no worry of falling off.

Drov carries a high powered laser rifle across his back whenever he leaves the ship. He's very accurate and thanks to his hoverboard, he can hit from any vantage point. The rifle is capable of piercing through most obstacles but the energy drain is great so he can't use it for rapid fire.

He also carries special brass knuckles that create tranch knives on activation. This way he can fight close quarters as well.

On ship he's the gunner. Using a turret that can rotate all around the ship he eliminates all blind spots. The cannon fires EMP shots to disable the foe before he lauches the powerful missle to finish things off.


btw they go in age like this: Novek 31, Seleen 29, Drov 25
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:59 am

Very nice Shadow. Accepted. Ill set up spoilers.
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:21 pm

Here goes nothing.

Name: Kyouh (Kyo, or Kyo-Chan) Hakumei

Race: Elf living as a human teenager

Gender: Female

Planet: Earth (Tokyo to be exact)
Appearance: Pointed ears, bright blue eyes, black hair streaked with white and pink, urban clothes (pants and t-shirt) pale skin, carrys a black bag containing unknown items.

Biography: Born in a secret unknown land of elves, and then brought to earth as a baby to be adopted and loved as a human. Unfortunately a bad family took her in, causing her to go through depression and run away at age 12. She grew until she turned 16, living in beautiful areas like parks, yet still homeless. At 16, her elf blood took over and paused her age and growth.
Kyo lived through a rough life, but somehow got enough money to support herself and get a house. Kyo is now 104, (yet still 16.) She settled in a beautiful traditional japanese home, but lacks excitement and adventure.
Personality: Depending on her mood, she can be quiet, loving, depressed, hyper, bored, or apathetic. She also has a pervy side. A bit of everything, yea?

Weapons: A zanpaku-to (or sword) that she is very talented with.

Powers: Kyouh has the power to read thoughts and feelings by touching.



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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Fri Apr 17, 2009 5:32 pm

Twizdid wrote:
Here goes nothing.

Name: Kyouh (Kyo, or Kyo-Chan) Hakumei

Race: Elf living as a human teenager

Gender: Female

Planet: Earth (Tokyo to be exact)

Appearance: Pointed ears, bright blue eyes, black hair streaked with white and pink, urban clothes (pants and t-shirt) pale skin, carrys a black bag containing unknown items.

Biography: Born in a secret unknown land of elves, and then brought to earth as a baby to be adopted and loved as a human. Unfortunately a bad family took her in, causing her to go through depression and run away at age 12. She grew until she turned 16, living in beautiful areas like parks, yet still homeless. At 16, her elf blood took over and paused her age and growth.
Kyo lived through a rough life, but somehow got enough money to support herself and get a house. Kyo is now 104, (yet still 16.) She settled in a beautiful traditional japanese home, but lacks excitement and adventure.
Personality: Depending on her mood, she can be quiet, loving, depressed, hyper, bored, or apathetic. She also has a pervy side. A bit of everything, yea?

Weapons: A zanpaku-to (or sword) that she is very talented with.

Powers: Kyouh has the power to read thoughts and feelings by touching.



By the way, I've never forum roleplayed before, Only real-time (aka chatroom) rp.

I like it. Good character idea. However, I would like a bit more detail in areas as follows:

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Biography: Born in a secret unknown land of elves, and then brought to earth as a baby to be adopted and loved as a human. Unfortunately a bad family took her in, causing her to go through depression and run away at age 12. She grew until she turned 16, living in beautiful areas like parks, yet still homeless. At 16, her elf blood took over and paused her age and growth.Kyo lived through a rough life, but somehow got enough money to support herself and get a house. Kyo is now 104, (yet still 16.) She settled in a beautiful traditional japanese home, but lacks excitement and adventure.

To the first Bold: Not sure I like the whole "Secret Land" thing... if you want to keep t a secret, plz at least put a planet name or the area it's in (Outlands, Democracy, etc.)

To the second Bold: Why were they a bad family? Who took her in? What was the pivotal point that made her leave?

To the third Bold:Why did her Elf blood take over? Why does it happen?

To the fourth Bold: How did she get enough money? Was she a theif? Was she a worker?

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Weapons: A zanpaku-to (or sword) that she is very talented with.

I would like more detail on what the zanpaku-to is. How it is shaped, any special qualities, etc.

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Powers: Kyouh has the power to read thoughts and feelings by touching.

Cool power. Reason for having this power? Not neccessary, just curious. Any other powers? Im guessing she is immortal right?

Overall, it is a good SU, it just needs some more detail before I accept it.
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Tue Apr 21, 2009 9:18 am

and zanpaku-to means "soul slayer"
i know cause its what the swords are called in Bleach.


EDIT: is anybody else going to join?
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Sat Apr 25, 2009 4:08 am

Cough "Your Loss"

Razz

Well im not editing my character sheet anymore. So i guess im not joining.
Unless yall are desperate for characters. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Sat Apr 25, 2009 4:15 am

? I dont get it. That is, once again, just plain lazy Dusk.
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Sat Apr 25, 2009 4:41 am

No, its called busy doing something else.

Earning gold on a cerain game.
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:34 am

I'm guessing this isn't going to happen, huh?
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:47 am

Ugh, I guess not. Not enough members here on Pokechat. Well, Ill try it on Wiichat again in awhile after the other RPs. Ill also keep your guy's sign ups.
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Tue Apr 28, 2009 12:56 pm

Redo.



Name: Kyouh (Kyo, or Kyo-Chan) Hakumei

Race: Elf living as a human teenager

Gender: Female

Planet: Earth (Tokyo to be exact)
Appearance: Pointed ears, bright blue eyes, black hair streaked with white and pink, urban clothes (pants and t-shirt) pale skin, carrys a black bag containing unknown items.

Biography: Born in a secret unknown land of elves, (known to the elves only as "Home", only visible with the eyes of an elf, but it is the furthest planet from the sun) and then brought to earth as a baby to be adopted and loved as a human. Unfortunately an abusive family took her in, causing her to go through depression and run away at age 12. She barely remembers the family, but she was pretty sure her "mother" was named Reiku. She grew until she turned 16, living in beautiful areas like parks, yet still homeless. At 16, her elf blood took over, as it always does to elves at his age, pausing her age and growth.
Kyo lived through a rough life, but got enough money by reading minds of humans for amusement. She bought her own house. Kyo is now 104, (yet still 16.) She settled in a beautiful traditional japanese home, but lacks excitement and adventure.
Personality: Depending on her mood, she can be quiet, loving, depressed, hyper, bored, or apathetic. She also has a pervy side. A bit of everything, yea?

Weapons: A zanpaku-to (or sword) that she is very talented with. Apperance of sword:
In this rp the zanpaku-to has no power, but I better give credit, this weapon is from Bleach, and is Tite Kubo's creation..

Powers: Kyouh has the power to read thoughts and feelings by touching. All elves have a unique power. She is also immortal like all elves.



How's that <w<
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PostSubject: Re: Solaris - Official Sign Up Thread   Wed Apr 29, 2009 1:17 am

Twizdid wrote:
Here goes nothing.

Name: Kyouh (Kyo, or Kyo-Chan) Hakumei

Race: Elf living as a human teenager

Gender: Female

Planet: Earth (Tokyo to be exact)
Appearance: Pointed ears, bright blue eyes, black hair streaked with white and pink, urban clothes (pants and t-shirt) pale skin, carrys a black bag containing unknown items.

Biography: Born in a secret unknown land of elves, and then brought to earth as a baby to be adopted and loved as a human. Unfortunately a bad family took her in, causing her to go through depression and run away at age 12. She grew until she turned 16, living in beautiful areas like parks, yet still homeless. At 16, her elf blood took over and paused her age and growth.
Kyo lived through a rough life, but somehow got enough money to support herself and get a house. Kyo is now 104, (yet still 16.) She settled in a beautiful traditional japanese home, but lacks excitement and adventure.
Personality: Depending on her mood, she can be quiet, loving, depressed, hyper, bored, or apathetic. She also has a pervy side. A bit of everything, yea?

Weapons: A zanpaku-to (or sword) that she is very talented with.

Powers: Kyouh has the power to read thoughts and feelings by touching.



By the way, I've never forum roleplayed before, Only real-time (aka chatroom) rp.


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